I was recently invovled in a revitalizing professional activity. I went out on a New England Association of Schools and Colleges visting team to evaluate a high school which is up for reaccreditation. It was such a refreshing experience to see such a strong community there. The people there are really proud of their school and very supportive of each other. I’ve also been applying for several summer programs. One is through the National Endowment for the Humanities and the other is the Western Mass Writing Project. I’m pretty excited about both prospects, but I’m not holding my breath on the England possibility. It’s really competitive.
In my several application processes, I had to write up some work that I do with writing that i would be willing to present to a peer group. Sujal read them over for me, and he suggested I post them, so here they are:
I would like to present some of the work I do as a teacher of creative writing. The first unit I teach is a unit on autobiographical writing. I begin with this unit, because I place an emphasis on sharing writing in my creative Writing class. I firmly believe that students do need to hear each other’s work to give them a sense of where they are in their own development and to allow them the opportunity to have pride in their work. I begin the semester with daily journal prompts about themselves. The journal prompts are a mainstay of the class, though the prompts shift focus during the various units. I give them participation grades for sharing their journal prompts. It does not significantly hurt the student if they do not read, but it doers boost their grade if the do read. I allow for one pass per week, in case something is too personal to read. I never force any student to read, but I do strongly encourage them to share.
The first assignment they have is to bring in some sort of object that each student feels represents him or herself in some way. It could be a pen, a journal, a basketball, a necklace, a doorknob, a shopping bag, etc. Then in class, I ask each student to write from the point of view of the object about him or herself. I suggest describing how they met or perhaps a significant conversation overheard by the object. I tell them that the piece of writing is from the object’s point of view but it should reveal a lot about the owner of the object. This tends to be an activity that is fun for them. When the first draft is due, they have an opportunity to share.
The next assignment I give is for the autobiographic essay. I stress the importance of choosing a very specific moment or aspect and getting as detailed as possible. It is with this essay that we go over the writing process in detail. I tell them that it is required to share this particular essay, so they each need to pick a topic that each is comfortable sharing with the class. The day we share the drafts, we just listen. If they would like me to take a look at the essay and make suggestions, I offer that opportunity. This essay must be brought to a final draft.
Over the next week I assign two more essays, a personal essay in which that can explore any topic that interests them. And the second essay is a persuasive essay on a topic about which they feel strongly. Of the three essays: the personal essay, the persuasive essay, and the identity object essay, they choose one to bring to a final draft for a grade.
The first unit is over with the assignment of this final draft. By this time, the groundwork is usually laid for a very tightly knit class that is very willing to take risks with their writing and to share their writing.
and the second one:
I would like to share one of the recent projects that I have developed and had students complete. This is a multi-media presentation in which Grade 12 students had to chose a current issue that is important to them or interested them, research the issue, take a stance on the issue, write an essay, and give a multi-media presentation to a panel at an evening forum. I believe it was an enormously beneficial project for the students.
Some of the basic parts were as follows. They first needed to choose some kind of current issue. The range they chose from was drilling for oil in Alaska, whether or not global warming is a myth, teen pregnancy, treatment of POW’s, alternative fuels, the effectiveness of management classes, the war on terror, cloning, legalizing marijuana, and the cause of street racing’s popularity. They needed to choose a faculty mentor, whom they could go to for direction when they needed sources for their research. For example, the student doing a project on whether global warming is a myth worked with the environmental science teacher for direction. They needed to research many different points of view on the issue.
While they were doing that, they also needed to find people to serve on their assessing panels by sending out formal request letters. The panel needed to consist of a parent, a teacher, a student, and an administrator. In doing that, I went over the proper techniques for writing a formal business letter.
As they assembled their research, they worked on the essay portion of the project. The essay needed to address their research techniques, their various findings, and their final conclusions and evaluations of the evidence. I gave them an opportunity to turn the essay in to me to look over before they brought it to a final draft. I gave them time to work in the library, both for research and for writing, so they could ask me questions as they did their work.
As they researched and wrote, we as a class wrote rubrics for both the essay and multi-media presentation. I broke them up into two camps, each camp had to write the first draft of a rubric. Then we as a class tweaked the documents and agreed upon final drafts. This way, the students knew exactly what was expected of them, and the panel knew exactly how to assess them. They again needed to deliver these documents to their panel members.
Also while they were writing, they needed to assemble a way to present their findings and conclusions to their panel. They needed to use some sort of media – a PowerPoint presentation, a website, a video, sound recordings, etc.
Then they turned the essays in to their various panel members about five days before the scheduled evenings of presentations. During this time, the panel members were to assess the essay using the rubric. On the two nights of presentations, each lasting 20-30 minutes, the panel again assessed the students, this time on the multi-media presentations. It was an intimate affair, catered with hors d’oeuvres, and friends and family were invited.
Finally, when all was done, the class wrote thank you notes to their mentors and panel members. They improved their writing, research, technology, networking, and public speaking skills. It also included the community. Overall, it was an incredible amount of work but very well worth it.
The second one, Sujal came to the high school to attend some of the presentations. I was really happy he came for two reasons — so he could see the good work some of my kids were doing, and so I could share with him some work that I did. I felt proud that he was there. Sometimes what one does in the classroom as a teacher goes so unnoticed. So I was happy to have him see it. And now I’m sharing it with you all.